I dont know, what this pain is;
But it hurts where it hurts most,
And bring along the tears.
I didnt knew I was alone,
until i found, all doors closed.
I thought I can bear it along,
But someway, along the way,
This is tearing my heart apart.
I hope somebody, anybody
Be there to care,
About the things I do,
The things I say,
The things I am.
Somebody, I am alone.
I hope you hear what I say,
And someday, someway,
I am there and you too,
To share along the smile,
To somebody, from the lonely guy.
3 comments:
Hi Umang!
I liked these lines
I dont know, what this pain is;
But it hurts where it hurts most,
And bring along the tears.
Is it 'and bring along the tears' or 'and brings down the tears' ? The former implies that pain results in tears always, the latter indicates that tears are optional. Correct me if i am wrong.
Your poems seem to hover over melancholy, how about some merrier, lighter poems?
~ Rachana
@Rachna
thnx....a lot...
well it is "and bring along the tears"
actually u r right, i write when m sad...so it ends up melancholic.... I'll try fr sm lighter shades.....
meanwhile why dnt you also put up your work here on blogspot....I would love to have a look...
:)
Really touched ..........
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